puff

点此听歌
因为原来的上传网址不是MMS开头的..麻烦大家点一下啦..

歌词如下
Hey Mavis,我忽然发现,这几天,我辗转难眠.

Hey Mavis,你真的很懒,背你在沙滩上,走了几圈.

在十万米高空我后悔不迭,离开之前没把你数落几遍.

看现在不知道何时会再见,陪我的只有照片,和那条,无聊的步行街.

The third day I was so down.眼前的,全都是幻觉.

Then susan told me to be strong,纯粹的感觉,才不怕考验.

Hey Mavis,你现在,是否会了解,生活里面伤害只是过眼云烟.

If all those sad stories turn out good ends.Would you still believe,that Vincent is gonna show you what love is.

I gusse it's just a matter of time,孩子们的童话该让我们讲完.It's all right,just take your time,i will wait to see the picture of you and i.

Hey Mavis i need you to be by my side.I wanna see your smile now and forever.

Hey Mavis i need you to be in my heart.I will be around you,I promise,I swear i will.

这首歌是帮朋友写给女孩子的..大家多给点意见啦~~~~~~

[ Last edited by puff on 2005-3-9 at 16:55 ]

puff

真的是谢谢各位了,编曲方面我最近也在头疼..会尽快编个完整版出来的~~~~

puff

真的很谢谢大家喜欢我这首歌啊..本来是朋友在澳洲要追一个女孩子,他叫我帮他写首歌,根据他的经历,其实那个女的长什么样子我都不知道,寒假的时候我一直在想,但是写了点东西自己很不满意,那个时候买了陶喆的太平盛世,听SUSAN说听哭了.结果第二天就写出来这首歌了.
歌词里面都是那小子泡妞的过程...
下个周末回BAND房慢慢弄~~会尽快给大家更完善的版本的!!

[ Last edited by puff on 2005-3-13 at 13:51 ]